Thread:Juandalyn/@comment-131168-20150516194723/@comment-5968662-20150519134305

Okay, I looked at it. It looks great! Of course, there are a few things that have to be corrected, but in general you did a good job :)


 * The first one is "coverversion", it should be with a capital C ("Coverversion").
 * Then with "Featured Members", it's rather "Beteiligte Mitglieder". "Beliebte Mitglieder" would be something like "Popular Members". ^^
 * Ordinal numbers in German aren't really used like "1ste, 2te". That's more you'd rather use when you're writing out the words (erste, zweite, etc.). With numbers, 1., 2., etc. are enough.
 * "Insgesamt Ausgewiesene Umsatz" would be "Verkäufe insgesamt".
 * "Songtexte" would be the plural form, referring to lyrics for more than one song. If it's only one song, it's "Songtext".
 * "Blechblas" -> "Blechbläser".
 * "Saiten" -> "Streicher" (It's kind of funny, if you're referring to the actual strings on an instrument, they're really called "Saiten". The ones who play the violin etc. are called "Streicher", though :))
 * "Trommel" -> "Schlagzeug". Drums are can be translated as "Trommeln", too, but a "Trommel" would be something like one single drum :) Schlagzeug is referring to the combination of a few drums and cymbal.
 * "Schlaginstrument" is just "Perkussion", "Tasteninstrument" is "Keyboard" (at some point they were just lazy enough and started using the English word haha). "Vermischung" is "Abmischung" (not sure why, but it's usually used in musical business). "Lesen" is "Lesung".
 * Continueing something from above, "Englisch Songtexte" would be "Englischer Songtext". "Japanisch Songtexte" would be "Japanischer Songtext", as well as "Rap Songtexte" becomes "Rap Songtext".
 * "Teil einer Medley" -> "Teil eines Medleys" (just a grammar thing.)

That would be all about the list. Regarding the sample sites you sent, there are a few other things (I'm sorry if I sound too nitpicky^^").

As said... I hope I wasn't too strict ^^ But that's all.
 * "aMa no Jaku (ぁまのじゃく) ist die 1. indie-single aus S/mileage". Nouns are capitalized, which would change it into "Indie-Single". Usually you don't say "aus x" but "von x". This would turn it into "aMa no Jaku (ぁまのじゃく) ist die 1. Indie-Single von S/mileage.". Same goes for the major singles, it would be "Hauptsingle".
 * While it's "die Single", it's "das Album".
 * In the infobox, too, "album" should be "Album".
 * "Nativen Titel" -> "Originaltitel".
 * Just another thing that caught my eye, "cover" is used in German as well, not "Abdeckung/en"^^. "Other covers" would be "Andere Cover" (for some reason the German plural of "Cover" is... "Cover".).
 * One last thing, in the categories it should be "Formation mit x Mitgliedern". The additional "n" is just another grammar thing.